Chapter 857
“If you don’t believe me, feel free to leave,” Dustin Rhys remarked, his tone direct.
Dustin wasn’t one for idle chatter; he simply told the guest to go.
Dahlia Nicholson displayed extreme narcissism, truly pushing the boundaries.
“Indulging in desire again, I see? Quite juvenile,” Nikki remarked, a hint of mockery in her voice. “Alright then, if you want to play, I’m in until the end. Hope you don’t end up regretting it. Let’s go!” Nikki declared, taking a step forward.
“Offered a chance, and it went to waste. Now Dahlia Nicholson’s riled up, and regrets won’t serve you!”
“If you’re sensible, a swift apology to my elder sister might earn her forgiveness.”
Jade Maiden Palace disciples exuded arrogance, as if watching a spectacle.
They seemed prepared for Dustin Rhys to plead.
Yet, surprisingly, he remained calm, unmoved even when Dahlia Nicholson exited the meeting hall.
As if her departure was of no concern.
“Leaving, you say?” Nikki paused by the door, casting a glance back. “This is your prime opportunity to keep me. Miss it, and you’ll rue it forever!”
Dustin Rhys displayed no reaction, enjoying his tea leisurely, as if he hadn’t heard.
“Enduring this? Let’s see how long you hold out!” Nikki clenched her teeth and left without a backward glance.
Dahlia Nicholson had to admit, Dustin Rhys was sharp, yet fate was against him.
All his calculations and caution amounted to naught.
Shouldn’t a man just be straightforward, even if it meant being a loyal companion?
Did he really think these tactics were effective?
Preposterous!
Dustin Rhys would need to beg her to return and make amends today. The goddess’s dignity and pride were at stake!
“Dahlia Nicholson’s gone; your tears won’t alter it now!”
“Deserved it! Stirred the elder sister’s anger, now you won’t even qualify as a lapdog!”
“Thought you could win the elder sister, Dahlia Nicholson, this way? Truly dramatic!”
“A man should stand his ground, not come begging to us!”
Jade Maiden Palace disciples joined Nikki, all exiting while casting reproachful words.
Nikki’s departure was marked by her haughty stride, maintaining her regal air, still a fairy of high rank.
“Dustin Rhys, this mess is your doing! Dahlia Nicholson’s departure is on you!”
Observing their departure, Hong Qingxia grew anxious.
“I’m to blame? Your elder sister led the drama, feigning sentiment.” Dustin Rhys shrugged.
“True, Dahlia Nicholson’s a bit full of herself, but her beauty invites unwelcome advances. Her caution is justified.” Hong Qingxia explained.
“Others might be taken, but not me.” Dustin Rhys sipped from his cup.
Unperturbed, Hong Qingxia hurriedly chased Dahlia Nicholson, pulling Dustin Rhys along. “Wait! Dahlia Nicholson, just a moment! Dustin Rhys wants to talk to you!”
Nikki’s lips curled, as if she’d foreseen this.
Turning, she crossed her arms, a regal posture. “What’s this? Can’t keep up the act anymore? Thought you were so resilient, but in the end, my allure was too much. Speak up then, I’m curious. Why are you pleading with me?”
Dustin Rhys gestured to the left and said gravely, “You’re headed the wrong way. The gate’s over there. Please, proceed.”
what happen to the last few chapters?
names was messed-up, and its kinda hard to understand, and some chinese names are already inserted..
What is this? From EP 854 (today’s daily update) some strange, chaotic chapters were added. Is everything ok?
Marina miss Dahlia a lot 🤣🤣
Totally chaotic chapters…
I don’t understand this last episode
So, it happens that this novel is written by some sort of AI? I don’t think human will mix things to this extent. I know it is a translation from some chinese novel. But before it was carefully translated
What’s going with the admin and the writer? What kinda mumbo jumbo is this? Who are these characters and these Chinese names?
You may be right. It looks like an AI written novel
I’m lost what is happening today
This is a mess.
To make it distinct let’s call them Dolly Parton and Cornholio. The pacing of the story is redundant and slow. It has become a stretched out storyline that is less and less interesting. So I was right that this came from an Orientalish story line.
What’s with loads of chapters having loads of paragraphs repeated and then missing some of the story so when young to the next page it’s obvious something is missing. Also names getting mixed up is becoming more frequent.
Dahlia Nicolson is now Jade Maiden Palace’s elder. Even the chinese names suddenly popped up. Looks like name messed up while transalating.
What’s this for?
There must be some writing error,
What’s this for?
There must be some error
Well I try to follow up with the mixture of names, as long as it is meaningful and align with the the scene.
Muddled up from 854-857. Something is wrong somewhere. who wrote this to make up for the day’s update?
I just had a one beer and I came to know that the chapters has been uploaded… Believe my mind got completely fucked up…and need no more beer.. Dahlia??? Where did she come from
I can’t seem to comprehend this update. The introduction of new names are off the script
I hope Dustin ain’t dreaming, or could this name discrepancy simply be an error?
WTF!!!Dhalia nicholson supposed to be a lover of dustin. Why is she one of the jade maiden palace now. Its too confusing now. The names are messed up. Dustin was suffering from poison and he has to prove to the hill family after 7 days that he is innocent for the killing of Paul Hill.
And when will the bigger weekly update come? Like 30 chapters? Doesn’t seem like this week.
WTH. Is there a child writing this with auto correct left on…
Mixed character’s names
In the official website, release for today is only up to 854 thus the last few chapters here made no sense cause it’s not part of the same book my guess.
The writing style changes every now and then. It’s like it’s written by multiple hands.
Now this botch up. How the hell did Dahlia Nicholson suddenly become a Jade Maiden?
What happen? 🤔
them made a mistake here
What’s going on? 😭
Copying from some Chinese novels got everything messed up 🤣🤣🤣
What is happening ?
This is completely mess, from where dahlia came up and her discipline attack Dustin. Anything?
What’s happening is unrelated to the events of the prior few chapters and how Dahlia ended up there. It’s losing interest right now.
Am I reading another story? Admin! What’s going on please?
Admin1 please fix whatever this is😤😤
Pl correct the chapters.
So many mix up in these last chapters. Couldn’t even relate with the previous chapter 854. Please do the needful. Thanks
And then?? Whats with the chinese names and Darhlia???🙄🙄
Did admin finally took the advice of those asking him to give us more updates with his own story line as updates was getting too slow? 🤔🤔🤔
Admin please tell me what the fuck is going on ? Author marina vittori is mad today I’ll write about her a little briefly ,no need to start a new story with nikki frost & her jade maiden palace its unnecessary & where the fuck is abigail & azalea all the time ? Nelson is dead still they are not here what’s going on & nelson’s wife & daughter should be present on nelson’s funeral & natasha too ,i think author totally forgotten abt them. Whatever From chapter 554 to 567 totally messed up with names & those are chinese names . What the fuck is this ? Im here since the beginning . The author marina vittori never made any mistake in taking the name of the characters.what happened today was she drunk ? Posted 7 chapters instead of 4, that’s why I always write, no one knows what is going on in the mind of the author. Sometimes 4, sometimes 5, sometimes 7, sometimes 45, sometimes 30, sometimes 80 chapters are posted simultaneously & for some days, she used to post only 1 chapter continuously. That’s why I came in the comment section, otherwise I used to go after reading the chapters first.Because earlier so many chapters were posted together, I used to spend time reading them and why should anyone comment.But since the author used to post only one flat post in a day I was in the comment section from that day in frustration. Today the author made the first mistake by naming the leader of Jade Maiden Place lady leader as Cornelius. Everyone knows Cornelius is the leader of Dustin’s Kirkin gang’s edge group. Then the author probably did not realize anything then give the name of the leader of jade maiden palace was dhalia nicholson ? Ru kidding me , fuck 🙆♂️🤦 . At one place the author has written “After a while, disciples from Jade Maiden Palace entered Fengyu Villa” just tell me some one how fyzer lodge became fengyu villa – It’s a chinese name . Author exposed today . The Chinese novel being she translated in to english & post on a app daily, today at some places she did not change the Chinese name to English. So got caught today, At one place the name of the Kirkin gang has been changed to qilin gang. ( its also a chinese name ) . At one place, Nikki’s name is also written as Hong Qingsia. Damn 🙆♂️🤦 so many mistakes in oneday with lotz of chinese reference. The author marina vittori earning a lot of money by translating a Chinese novel and posting it on the app every day because this novel has become popular. And here the admin has made the website popular by copying the chapters from that app and pasting it here. When this novel was first posted on the website on 9th July 2023, there were very few readers. I’ve been a reader here since day one , I myself have seen how gradually the readers of the website increased from a few hundred people to 50,60k . From 5K to 50K people daily .If you have huge readers on your website, then you know how much the website is engaged and how high traffic increases . Now many ads are visible in every page of the website, which were not visible before, it means that Google Adsense has been approved for the website. congrats admin. Your website has become monetized because of our high engagement. There the author marina is earning money from the app by translating completed Chinese novels daily And here you are making a lot of income with the help of huge traffic of daily 5k to 50 k readers. No problem congratulations, Just angry on the author bcz when when she has the entire raw chinese novel lying with her, that too is completed, so why is she translating only 5 pages? Everyday she should translate 40-50 pages like before. If she had written thinking from her own mind, then we would have understood that it is difficult, that’s why she is writing 1 chapter or 5 chapters after thinking. But today she has been completely exposed that she is translating Chinese novels and publishing them in that app. So if she has complete Chinese novel lying with her, she should translate 40-50 pages daily and post it on the app. Then the admin here goes there and copies 40-50 pages together and pastes them here. Today the author marina vittori has been exposed, That’s why from tomorrow she should translate 40,50 chapters from that chinese novel and update in that app. So that the admin of this website can copy and paste those 40,50 here. So that we all readers enjoy reading 40,50 chapters together.
Chinese drunk AI took over.
I think we should not force the admin to upload hastily .
She/ He was force to update or accidentally uploaded the different version.
I remember on the other website about the novel My Billionaire Mom have different versions because its originally a Chinese novel.
From moment I first read read this novel I knew that this was an oriental novel originally.
I hope it will not end up like a Dragon Ball Z story. Id like to see Dustin or Logan as John Wick 70% and 30% Jet Li. If you can reach the author admin please suggest it to her.
Yea AI git fooled. Anyway I’m still thinking about the heirloom sapphire which Julie stole from Florence and sold it for a fortune. Ms Vittori has likely forgot about that
yes before i started following and reading i was happy because i can read like 10 chapters but now its dwindling sometimes 1 chapter now 3 chapters? if you cant post more than 3 better end the story
Marina Vitori today got caught!.. it was not her novel after all.. she translates chinese books and made a fortune out of it. Is this considered plagiarism? …if not then at least translate 20 or 30 chapters a day for the readers to quench their thirst. The story line now is pretty messed up.. i dont know if it could go any better!.. sad.. was a good story tho..
The sudden continuation of the update caught me off guard… Even more so with the mixed name Cornelius to Dahlia and then everything fell apart!
Suddenly im lost…why dahlia.
Then chinesse name…so confusing…
Damn..really frustrated things like this happen..cannot catch up the story anymore…😥😥😥
Copy Translate and Paste
Even Google translator will do it better
Author exposed
Shame on Marina Vittori
A bottle of champagne might be the reason for the confusion of names and the event’s.. i truly understand, maybe🙂
From 854-857 this is app messed up. The names are even confusing. Why am I lost?
Does it matter if Chinese or Russian????.
It’s free so stop complaining… We know it’s a mistake and will be corrected.
SHUT The F…K ..UP.
Kinda seems like someone was drunk or high when they were writing.
I found the source Novel:
Its a Chinese Novel – The Legendary Master’s Wife
This is now confusing
Where are all these Chinese names coming from?
There must be a mix up with the story line